Hello, I played your game and the least I can say is that it's quite a nice story and it keeps you busy in a fun way. Now, on to the list of the things I noticed:
- There is places where you can't walk on places you'd swear you could walk on and places you can walk where you'd swear you can't. It's pretty weird to me.
- Sometimes, the window is eating up the text. (It's still readable, but it's also noticeable and can rub people the wrong way.) Also, there seems to be some mistakes made like "sign" being used instead of "sigh" or extra spaces between words for some reason.
- You can end up softlocked while jumping (with the Beast form or not) on the right of the small platform in the neighbor. (You can also access the menu and save leading to the possibility for the player to have a broken save file.)
Clearly, this game would have deserved a serious rereading to rectify spelling and typos, as well as more rigorous playtesting sessions. (No offense to your sister which, I am sure, must had a lot of fun playing through your game and hunting bugs for you.)
With that said, the story - again - is nice and engaging. I somewhat relate to Elise, chasing after her dreams. And the gameplay is fairly original compared to RPG Maker standards.
I wish you good luck with that game jam! ^^