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First jam entry I rated 5 for Story. The way you convey the plot is truly amazing, I feel like I just wacthed a movie.

+Great story with its own world and likeable characters (I liked the main trio) 

+Well done intro 

+Good mapping 

+Decent battle system

-Your choice of music is a bit weird. Some BGMs and MEs feels out of place, one BGM start playing at 150% speed and the next one is 50%, something feels off about it. 

-Text is kinda hard to read. I see you tried to make it look fancy but it made the text longer and less comprehensible. Sometimes I had to read one sentence twice to comprehend it.

Overall, I liked the game good job!

Thanks so much for the rating, and for the compliment! I'm coming into game development as a writer, so I feel like story telling is my strongest point. I'm super happy you enjoyed the plot and characters! ^-^ 

Yes, music was rough for me in the jam. MV music is limited and I tried, but finding a way to make it fit the scene clearly didn't work as well as I wanted it to. 

As for the text, was there a specific example that you found difficult to read? I wanted to give each character their own voice, so I'm wondering if one voice I used had a negative side effect in terms of comprehension. 

Thank you for playing my game and taking the time to write a review! Makes me very happy ^-^