First jam entry I rated 5 for Story. The way you convey the plot is truly amazing, I feel like I just wacthed a movie.
+Great story with its own world and likeable characters (I liked the main trio)
+Well done intro
+Good mapping
+Decent battle system
-Your choice of music is a bit weird. Some BGMs and MEs feels out of place, one BGM start playing at 150% speed and the next one is 50%, something feels off about it.
-Text is kinda hard to read. I see you tried to make it look fancy but it made the text longer and less comprehensible. Sometimes I had to read one sentence twice to comprehend it.
Overall, I liked the game good job!