Wow, you've done it again! I had a lot of fun with this entry. I won't spoil too much, but I think the story, art, and VA really help to create an coherent narrative.
I really like how you adapted the game to accommodate the fact you were running out of time. I think that in some ways, it enhances the experience rather than negates. It does end rather abruptly, but to be honest, there is already a lot of content, so that you should be really proud with how large a game you've made in 9 days.
+ Bonus points for the references back to Crystal Captor.