I'm back and better than ever! I like how you were able to give a good amount of info despite how short your passages were! It's nice to see how we're able to see relationships with other characters and even sense some tension between them! One thing I will say is that you should have brought more attention to the evil voice earlier on. When I first saw it I thought your colored the line after slamming your fingers on the keyboard or it was a choice I didn't unlock because of my choices, but it turned out to be the voice!
Just one question though, was the Lord naked when we arrived to his loft?!