I adore(!) that you see your path when you complete the objective or die. Really nice looking game :).
Feels good to play.
Because the asteroids randomise position when you die, it's not immediately clear that you're 'progressing' when you die. And once I figured that out, there wasn't much strategy - I just killed myself a few times to make the level easier, then finished it. So I would say thematically not so strong.
But outside of that, great package!