i love how this was a poetry based game!! that was a super cool concept and i like how you told the narrative of the poem and turned lines into different sprites to represent it! it was super consistent in storytelling, with each new sprite being a new line of the poem. (also this poem was amazing and im glad i was introduced to it via this game :D) the choice was a really cool concept, turning the poem into either a positive narrative or negative one! the only feedback i'd give is more of an indication of which option you're picking at the end, as when i was walking up to make the final choice i didn't really know which ending i was getting