Great work, especially for a first timer! A thoroughly depressing story, if a bit vague at times. More consistent art of the same resolution and colour scheme would really help the presentation here. Good job with the art in the two important scenes. The hint of purple in the protagonist's hair - which we also see in the suicide scene - is an incredibly neat detail. Some more areas to explore would also extend the worldbuilding a bit. Keep it up, and keep putting ketchup on pizzas!
(side note: I had to reset after checking gamest gameshop twice, as my game completely froze)