What an astounding presentation! Art is sick! If I can give you a tip - it is good to not give tutorial to read before gameplay, because it is always out of context and for me, for example, it is hard to remember what I read a second ago :D I think the best approach is to make it merged into the game - controls appear for a while in the background and it should be obvious that you can pick up stars and bring it to the fire :D Overall pretty pleasurable game, with some screenshake and other juiciness related thing could be much better, so try to develop it this way!