This is such great feedback, thanks for taking the time to go through everything! Developing an art style for games is something I'm very new to, and I've had to do a lot of experimentation. As someone who has a strong background in realistic painting, it's been difficult trying to find a consistent style that balances a painterly style with outlined, stylized objects. Hopefully I can strike a better balance between detailed and stylized in the future!
-Kati