Thanks for giving it another shot! I'm genuinely happy for all your feedback, and for the thought you've put into our jam entry. I agree with everything you've said in terms of advice, and am definitely going to be giving things better consideration in terms of difficulty curve next time. Also, very grateful that you like the character and art!
You caught a typo (one of a fair few), that happened due to some last minute issues when we transferred the dialogues from the docs into Unity. It was definitely meant to be "Lono is now among us."