What I liked:
I love that you took the time to create original characters, and your opening scene was excellent. I really want to know how that was done! I love the look of the menu and battle! How the character actually moved into attacks! Everything is very pretty! The music choices seem to fit the situations well.
What I didn't like:'
I'm sure you'll be horrified to find out that there's a major glitch! Every time a battle finishes, the player attempts to run up and to the left for several seconds. This keeps you not only keeps you from being able to avoid other creatures on the map since it forces you to run by them, it makes it so that battles take much longer than they should, and it really makes the combat feel tedious (which is sad, because the rest of what you did with the battles was so cool!) This isn't the only movement glitch in the game, and it felt sluggish in response to commands. Apparently, this glitch comes into play when you load a save file as well. On experimentation, I've discovered that this can be overcome once it starts by pressing all the movement buttons at once . Weird...
I've gone through the first hour, and I don't see a single mention of stars, or the touching of them (or anything I'd consider to be an interpretation of that). This is a major flaw because that's an absolute minimum for what needs to be in your submission. I also am not super excited by the writing. While I've certainly seen worse, but there's a lot of room for improvement.