Hi MsLilly, I just played the first 30 minutes of your game. I really love your mapping, especially the town map was gorgeous. And I love how everything felt so alive with all the NPCs and animals. Your cutscenes were so nice to watch and your writing was really good. Meeting Gale was definitely my favourite cutscene, they were so cute together.
Now I did get softlocked at a few points:
- When I tried to use the light item in the caves, I was returned to darkness.
- When I interacted with a shopkeeper near Marsha, the game froze after said shopkeeper turned towards me. I tried interacting with her both from the right and from down, but the issue remained.
I also noticed some (small) issues:
- The name Myna is squashed in the naming sequence. I'm not sure if there's anything you can do about that.
- Myna's bust in particular looks blurry.
- The globe is hiding behind the closet.
- Because you can't walk on the chairs, the only way to interact with the letter is to interact with the apples again.
- On the outside map of Myna's home right before you transfer to the next map, there's a bit of mountain that's square and not round. I can show a screenshot if you need me to.
- Your beautiful mountain map looks off with those square shadows. I believe the FSM pack actually comes with round shadow tiles.
- There's a portrait missing of Dad when you first come across the broken bridge.
- The small elevation in front of the cave and next to the waterfall can be accessed through several points, namely by walking on the flowers and by walking on a part of the wall as well.
- The ! icons that the monsters have don't always appear above them, but above nothing. This happens in particular with the first encounter in the caves, as well as the bird/eye thing near the exit.
- There's a bird/eye monster combo in the caves that don't attack you or do anything. They're on the second map right before the Redcaps.
- Your father is invisble during the fixed the bridge cutscene.
- The yellow tile.
- Missing portraits while interacting with the horses.
- The cat gets stuck in her moveroute I believe.
- The text says a long spear was found in the town's chest, but it is actually a Mithril spear.
- Myna's portrait is missing when you interact with the dog
- When I enter the crypt, I can actually walk up into the darkness
- It's kind of weird that Gale starts out without full HP & MP
I'll try and continue my playthrough later.