Battles early on felt a little tough, and there were no (as far as I could find) resurrection items. If Myna dies before getting to the town, it's an auto game over. There was an NPC that gave a soft lock in town, and I was unable to continue in the area under the Church as the only path available to me didn't lead anywhere, and I was unable to back track.

Suggestion: Give a resurrection item or two, and don’t ‘hide’ the items in the shack! Either make them visible so the player knows to inspect a location, or have Myna suggest they pack for the trip and auto-add them to the inventory. Also, these initial battles should be a cake walk or of minimal difficulty; they felt VERY difficult for no reason. Lastly, let the player backtrack!

So I believe most of the valid criticism has been said in previous comments so this should be brief. 

Story
The story itself lacks a dynamic feel to it, it's generic to a fault. The scenes playout like one would believe without taking the tropes to the extreme or flipping them on their heads. I thank you for not starting with a flashback or monologue about the world. 

• The intro is too slow and lack any strong character motivation
  • My suggestion is to show more of the goal of the father and his flight device as it's far more interesting than what was offered. 

Gameplay
Balancing of course but I'll explain what was missing from your balancing. 

• Enemies have too much health. If they were bosses this would be fine
• They all have 1 too many skills or said skills are too powerful
• The party doesn't have enough MP or TP to operate properly in battles. Should increase TP gain when doing damage and taking damage. 

Overall you should vigorously playtest the game and lower your scope. Just a heads up for any game you plan on making, on any engine, playtest and fix out bugs as soon as they come. The game should've just been about finding parts to fix the flying machine. No towns were needed. Just a short story about the father and daughter achieving one or both of their dreams. 

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I enjoyed the game as far as I played it. The characters and storyline were good so far and I loved the custom artwork. There were a lot of bugs, tho, and some of them really detracted from my enjoyment. The worse thing was the battles. They were long and pretty boring. I'm not sure if you went with default spells but the animations didn't seem to match the names at all. Blood suck in particular is very weird, with its lightning ball animation. At any rate, I thought the game was pretty good just with a few things that held it back.

After the first cave the dad didn't spawn for the cut scene. Other than that the game is wonderfully done.

So slim said most of what I have to say. The softlocks were definitely annoying.

Seems a bit odd that the first cutscene doesn't use the name you chose and uses ??? instead (unless that is your chosen name). 

There is no warning that you can't return to previous maps. Would be nice to have a warning when it comes to points of no return.

Dad goes missing/invisible a lot during cutscenes.

The 100 TP skills are basically useless. There is no TP reserve, so there is almost never a reason to use them because the battle is done by then.

During the exit of the first caves right before repairing the bridge, you can see a phantom enemy that disappears a few seconds after you re-enter.

When you enter the city, you can mess up the children's pathing and set off an event saying that you shouldn't be leaving town.

The one mimic chest in the last area can be interacted repeatedly. You can also talk to it to start the fight (gives no rewards), then fight it again by talking to the chest next to it. Afterwards, the mimic stays shut and you can keep interacting with it for potions. At this point the game is done and you can't progress.

During the first pilgrimage cave after you obtain Gale (do a recovery for Gale after he joins or start him off at the starting level via the character database instead), if you immediately turn around, you can walk off the map and grab edge chests.

One of the tiles in the last area is a single directional passthrough. This means you can't return to previous sections of the map.

Hi MsLilly, I just played the first 30 minutes of your game. I really love your mapping, especially the town map was gorgeous. And I love how everything felt so alive with all the NPCs and animals. Your cutscenes were so nice to watch and your writing was really good. Meeting Gale was definitely my favourite cutscene, they were so cute together.

Now I did get softlocked at a few points:

• When I tried to use the light item in the caves, I was returned to darkness.
• When I interacted with a shopkeeper near Marsha, the game froze after said shopkeeper turned towards me. I tried interacting with her both from the right and from down, but the issue remained.

I also noticed some (small) issues:

• The name Myna is squashed in the naming sequence. I'm not sure if there's anything you can do about that.
• Myna's bust in particular looks blurry.
• The globe is hiding behind the closet.
• Because you can't walk on the chairs, the only way to interact with the letter is to interact with the apples again.
• On the outside map of Myna's home right before you transfer to the next map, there's a bit of mountain that's square and not round. I can show a screenshot if you need me to.
• Your beautiful mountain map looks off with those square shadows. I believe the FSM pack actually comes with round shadow tiles.
• There's a portrait missing of Dad when you first come across the broken bridge.
• The small elevation in front of the cave and next to the waterfall can be accessed through several points, namely by walking on the flowers and by walking on a part of the wall as well.
• The ! icons that the monsters have don't always appear above them, but above nothing. This happens in particular with the first encounter in the caves, as well as the bird/eye thing near the exit.
• There's a bird/eye monster combo in the caves that don't attack you or do anything. They're on the second map right before the Redcaps.
• Your father is invisble during the fixed the bridge cutscene.
• The yellow tile.
• Missing portraits while interacting with the horses.
• The cat gets stuck in her moveroute I believe.
• The text says a long spear was found in the town's chest, but it is actually a Mithril spear.
• Myna's portrait is missing when you interact with the dog
• When I enter the crypt, I can actually walk up into the darkness
• It's kind of weird that Gale starts out without full HP & MP

I'll try and continue my playthrough later.