Ohhh I play a little the genere of graphic adventures (because I like more interaction), in this case I should congrats the piece of art you made, I love the end, because I dont wait for it, the last family draw was great!!! do you publish it in any web? Instagram? DeviantArt?
Ok now I will to make opinion about bad things: because the game is strongly based on dialog texts, ok it has the name of the character that talk, but I think is more intuitive if plus of it, the bubble change something, color, position, line that points to head of character, etc; it will make more confortable because is not a book; optionaly the face of characters can be in left or right (is classic).