Congrats on your entry! :)
For a short story, I feel like the characters were a bit dull, and the choices felt meaningless as they were often the same.
I would have liked to have some more agency in the game.
thank you! I agree, those are the worst parts of the game. I think if I had more “days” in it and fleshed out the characters / dialogue some more it could be better. I planned on having two different endings but was running out of time.
Yeah it happens all the time in jams, so no worries. :)
The idea is there, maybe you can keep working on it if you feel like it!
