I like the twist on Paper Please - adding the panicky movement was a neat idea.
There's several flaws, though. Here's some:
As expected of a jam game, the game has some clunkiness (when there's too much passengers, some appear as if they're outside), some format of a tutorial should be present in game and not only in the description.
A major flaw is that my train got stuck, moving towards the first location. After finishing the first round of work, I just got softlocked.
I especially like the art on this one, along with the camera. It looks very nice, and the small camera movements add a lot.
Keep on fighting! :)