No problem!
Ah yeah I feel that - I found myself cutting out parts of my own game due to time restraints. Your game was one of the longest I've read, text-wise, so I definitely understand not being able to finish everything in a month (especially if you're working solo). As for the POV switching, some of it occurred out of the italics which I assumed was either a mistake/formatting problem.
The pod errors persisted regardless of the day I tried to stay in bed - it wasn't giving me the option to continue, and I actually brought up stats a few times in order to progress before it looped me back a few messages. The option it wouldn't let me click on in the stasis area was this: "[[Knock on the door behind which Cenisa locked herself. If you are going to wait, you’d father have a companion.|action][$action = 1][44 -=5]]"