Thank you! Really glad you enjoyed it.
I do agree with you concerning the last part feeling rushed. It kinda came together in like a week. Even with going through it multiple times, I can see how it would still feel more like a draft. I had actually planned to have more, especially after taking with Jake, but I ran out of time :/ I am currently working on my other big project, but I've been toying with the idea of continuing it.
When you talk about the swtich of POV, is it about the text in italic?
About the errors, on which day did you have issues with the voice in your pod (first, second or both)? And the the one in the stasis pod, was it during your first encounter? Do you have by any chance the error notifications?