I wasn't sure how the story used the idea of reflection, as it doesn't really show up in metaphor or imagery. It also seemed to have a very rushed pace; I wasn't entirely clear on the transitions between points of action.
I was attempting the reflection in her life...as well as at the end of the story. (clearly could be done better :) ) As for the rushed pace, I think I tried to cram too much plot into a short story...
AND definitely thanks for the feedback, helps me to improve for next time.
