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I really liked this work. You had some very powerful prose and explored the narrator's personality very well. I liked the use of italics to divide past from present, it helped everything flow nicely. I also appreciated how you used a unique but still recognizable vision of the TAO Coalition faction's culture. Very well done overall; one of my favourite pieces so far!

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