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really nice opening line(s)

pacing seemed a little fast, but one of my favorites so far, nailed the theme and the ending was amazing

the opening is absolutely amazing and honestly this concept seems almost what the theme was made for, great read. 

Really enjoyed this one, a little hard to read, but the imagery is still powerful and the moodboard nails the feel, i think

not at all mate, even send me a link or something

great read, very well written battle scene

always love reading about the jackals, and it was nice to see a take on there culture 

should be fixed now

I'm actually super excited to play this game. Hope the the art problems get sorted out soon

G'lgraark is back!!!

well, thats ONE down-

that last half was a wild ride of emotions 

Respect to the guardsman. 

Nice story! (Now you've got me thinking, a Jackal hacker would be a cool RP character, hmmm...)

Thank you!

Thank you so much! that really means a lot to me!

glad you enjoyed that line and the descriptions :)

stupid umies... I mean seriously, we could save the world but nooo, lets build steampunk robots instead lol. a really well written story, nice work!

Amen

I could gush about this story forever: Sea battle, sea serpant, pesky elves getting there comeuppance, beautiful descriptions and a lovely take on the OPR lore, well done!

 Goblin-Power  accuracy!

great story! felt like a horror story right at the end

I do love a good siege. the story and descriptions were both excellent, and I really like your mood board too. assuming this is based on tales from your tabletop? 

Itz Krumpin' Time!!!

Loved the descriptions of the characters! you may just make me print a ratman army

Interesting story, really liked the background you gave about the characters family and crest

the twist was indeed great! loved the concept too

One of my favorite story's so far! really liked the take on Jackal culture and the OPR lore

Great story! really liked the descriptions and some amazing lines of dialogue

Thanks!

Thank you!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 

Thank you so much!!! that really means a lot to me!

(Tbh, this was a very last minute thing so I'm glad it came out good!)

That's... ominous

I really like how you divided up the story in to 3 "acts", in a way, and thought the process of the robot becoming more sentient was really well done.

Great story! really enjoyed reading from each of the warriors perspectives

I love this story so so much, keep following your dreams Shinsplint!

Great story, really liked the the descriptions and twist, plus the little art piece

Orcs got Krumped

what a twist!

great story, really enjoyed the meaning behind the necklace.