i'm not much of a visual novel guy so i can't say much about this. theres certainly a consistant art style here and its presented quite nicely.
however, i would have liked to see some kind of sprite effects in certain scenes to make it look a bit more lively. maybe some rain or beams of sunlight that flicker? light effects are easy. just draw an angled line/bar and set it to 60 fps in the scene. in the sprite editor, make one frame of the light beam, and one frame without.
this concludes my analysis of this entry.