That was FANTASTIC!
Fantastic mood, with the SFX and the screen itself. The retro text-adventure feel to it was very well done, and it served the experience well.
The text descriptions I feel also gave it that slight horror feel, where you can't see exactly what's happening but know it's not good.
And... what an ending.
I was not expecting it to hit me so hard.
Looks simple, but has some good thought and challenge put into it. Awesome entry!