Man! This was such a cool game! I really enjoyed playing it. Great writing and interpretation of the theme. I can easily see this growing into a full-fledged game.
One thing I noticed is because I wanted to know what happens next fast, I kept hitting the dialogue window and I missed a couple of lines. So maybe it'd be cool to have "did you understand what I just said?" type option periodically... Or, maybe it's just me. lol