That's a fair point, that Claire wouldn't know that you were the son of the woman she was thinking about. I'll rewrite the dialogue slightly to reflect that fact :)
Also, you won't be able to get closer to Claire until Act Three, by which point the club dates will become unavailable, so it was now or never for the date event ;P
To be fair...
Claire could've made the connection on her own.
May be a bit of a stretch but hear me out.
She didn't know anything about us, until the encounter with Tom.
There she learned that Robin was "the guy her dad's obsessed about" #nohomo
And well... Who knows how secretive they are within members of the ORG. Or how much she actually knows or cares about "the guy".
But poking around for a bit, it would most likely end up linking back to Robin's mom.
After all, the reason Tom was after Robin was because of his mother. Also why Jessica is helping us.
Regular ORG goons noticed that Tom had a stick up his ass about Robin, I wouldn't be surprised if the Chief's daughter could dig up or just overhear more info on the matter.
Bah, what the fuck am I doing, telling the dev how his own fucking story goes.
Still, you either had something similar in your head or just forgot when you wrote the dialogue in the first place.
I didn't really see anything wrong with it, but probably because the bar dates were added after the eldritch event.
I just assumed Claire found out a bit more on who Robin was after the date.
my problem is that given her family issues and how jessica and your mom were the only positive adults in her life. finding out that your her son would likely be an important point in their relationship that changes it from wanting to piss off her dad, to actually having an emotional connection...and then a genital connection
Yeah, it will most certainly be part of her progression, but in would also be kinda iffy if the only reason she's going after you is because you are your mother's son.
She did soften up two times.
First time when the MC mentioned that he didn't have a mother.
Second time when we came around with Jessica.
But to me the progression seemed fine.
She knows our mother, so she has some interest in us aside from just wanting to piss off her dad.
She's not going to be head-over-heels because we're the son of one of the only people that treated her right, but she's at least giving us a chance.
Eh, not like it matters, Arc already changed the dialogue and who knows how he's going to progress her story.
Claire is not a main girl, won't be a main girl either.
But she seems to be a borderline main girl.
More content than the average side girl but no story of her own.
