I actually had fun playing this game. I do have a few things to point out though.
- There were certain grammatical mistakes at the start (hey we are all gamers who cares about grammar if we can understand HAHA)
- Like the previous comment I think adding sounds to this game will make it more complete and immersive
- A better designed graphics would definitely make the game more immersive and pleasant to look at
- I'm not sure how it's part of the theme (but hey come on... we are here to play and make games who cares if you create this game or an MMORPG for submission)
And considering you only had a few days to work on this, I think it's quite an enjoyable and interesting game overall