Personally i thought the length of the ship was fine but that might be because I played a lot while testing, so i'll keep that in mind.
I also agree with you about the death sequence however I wasn't sure how to stop that because the player and camera are static but the level itself moves, this was because i was having camera issues with the player moving.
I forgot to add a death-box on the ceiling if players go to high.. Welp I'm noting that down for next time thank you.
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