Amazing twist held back by some really messy editing. Given the time constraint, totally understandable. Made me smile a ton when I got to the end.
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Thank you for the nice comment😁 The original idea was a lot more silly and fun but it got "grimdarked" a little while writing it, so it's good to see it was still smile-worthy. Not to bother you, but can you tell me how I can improve the editing issue? I'm not a native speaker so it's really hard to figure that out on my own😅