Nice job incorporating Knight Walkers into a character story, that’s well done.
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I'm glad you liked it - I think giant mechs (and the people that drive them) are super neat, and I like writing about them while avoiding the bolter-porn angle of "This giant war-machine strides across the battlefield and kills everything in its path and it's sick as hell!". It didn't fit into this story for space reasons, but if I ever write a Titan Lord story again it'll be multiple pilots for one Titan, like Pacific Rim only they're a polycule.