I appreciate that you shared your notes and some insights into your writing process, and I'll take those into account in my comments.
I found the flow of the story a little hard to follow at times. You could literally double the story's length and still fit within the word count limit, so, especially when you're trying to evoke a very alien mindset and perspective, I would add a line or two that helps clarify what's going on - without "breaking character", naturally.
That said, I always appreciate when writers try and depart from the ideas and lore of the "source" franchise and play with what makes the OPR lore unique, and I like how you explore the Robot Legions' unique psychology. I think again you could benefit from more of a back-and-forth here - I would have appreciated seeing Kali a little further along in the development of her heterodox philosophy, rather than the very initial stages. I think that might have worked better as an exploration of the theme by setting up a dialogue about different modes of 'good' and their contrasting evils.