The flow and context definitely suffered due to having the time between two World Cup matches to do some research and submit an entry, closing out knowing I had just edged past the 500 word minimum. Felt I could get away with it by having readers fill in some of the blanks but after revisiting it a few days later it’s all quite rough. Thanks for reading, though!
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Thank you for writing! I did enjoy the work and, let me add that the titular Catechism as a central motif was a good choice. I think that's what made me curious to see both where Kali's thoughts develop, and to further explore the idea of a robotic civilization with a "religious" central theme - it's an unusual worldbuilding choice, and therefore quite compelling.