Machine translation gender issues:
Charly: 'Currently, he held the role of supervisor of the historical development and art area of New Dawn.' Maybe 'He held' should be 'I hold'.
When speaking to Daniella with Inquiry, Joaquin says, 'Hello, Joaquin called me, and I will be your new counselor.' Then he says, 'As is his name.' I don't know if a wordplay is intended, but it is odd in English. He says the same thing to Elizabeth, Frezzita and Lina.
When proposing that Joaquin take photos, Daniella says, 'What does it say?', instead of 'What do you say?'
Danan: When first talking to him, he says he wouldn't choose it as a fulltime job, then says, 'He did not give me from this district at all.' I don't know if 'He' is Demien, but the sentence is confused.
In response to Inquiry by Joaquin, Danan several times says 'he' and 'his' instead of 'you'. 'He is a public figure in the underground'. 'I calculate that's in his background, that's why he's in Sol Invictus. 'But in the records, only his record in Awakening Club, and his time in MMA, are listed.' 'Although it should be added that he preferred to save that mercenary, rather than fulfill his revenge.' Danan ends the conversation correctly, saying 'That speaks well of you.'
Zayran: when responding to Inquiry and talking about herself: 'They say he had the Devil in him.' Might be either 'They said I had the Devil in me.' or 'They said "she has the Devil in her."' depending on whether she quoted the nuns directly.
Lucretia: 'I have never seen him at the parent meeting.' Probably, 'I have never seen you' instead.
Joaquin tells Lucretia, about Sarah: 'Yes, indeed I am his father, but I am your counselor now.' Her father.
Elizabeth: When talking about Ariza, Joaquin says, 'Yes, I was his teacher for many years, and you could say we were friends.' Her teacher.
Eliza says: 'She always wanted to impress him' instead of 'impress you'.
Joaquin again about Ariza: 'I warned him, perhaps I had to be firmer.' 'Then I went after his killers' ... 'it did not bring him back to life.' Him and his change to 'her'.
Eliza: 'I hope his soul is at peace.' Her.
Miriam, about Charly: 'It gives me the creeps, but it's part of our work team.' He instead of it.
Miriam about Minerva: 'Well, if he's so eager to bring out his connections to the boss, I'll hook you up with Demian.' maybe 'she's so eager' and 'her connections'
Joaquin about Minerva: 'I simply asked him what he was doing at Sol Invictus, and he told me to talk to you.' maybe 'I simply asked her what She was doing at Sol Invictus, and she told me to talk to you.'
Demian: 'I know, for me it is counterproductive, but if he decided to go with you, it is because it is of the utmost importance.' Not sure who he means. Minerva?
When speaking to Frezzita, about Dhalia, Joaquin says, 'They says he is strong, but I don't think he's too solemn.' And 'I get the feeling that he cares more about Awakening than he does about the affairs of the Coven.' Change all the 'he' to 'she'.
Also about Dhalia and Joaquin, Frezzita says, 'Were they lovers? She was your boss, wasn't she?' maybe 'Were you lovers?'
To Lina, Joaquin says, 'It's not watching them, don't think you're the superstar either.' I'm not sure about this line.
Joaquin says to Lina, 'Is something wrong miss? I asked her name.' Should be 'your name'.
About Jade, Joaquin tells Lina, 'Exactly; if you have doubts about what happened; ask him if it was a fixed fight.' maybe 'ask her'.
Evelyn to Joaquin about the pictures she sent him: 'Even if she had told me she was very ugly.' Maybe would be 'Even if you had told me I was very ugly.'
Sarah: 'That is the Chapel of Hope, we know he has personal custody at his home.' Not sure who has personal custody in this sentence.
Joaquin asks Sarah: 'Did they get in trouble for Lina?' I think he means 'Did you get in trouble for Lina' or 'because of Lina'.
Daniella: 'It must indeed instill fear, for Vinicius, to flee from Evelyn's house.' It change to 'You'.
Zayran, about Jade: 'That native is cute, isn't it.' maybe 'isn't she.'
Lina tells Joaquin not to harass Melissa. He says, 'What are you talking about?, I am his counselor.' maybe 'her counselor.'
Zayran, wondering about Joaquin, (Does she still have feelings for Miriam?) He.
Joaquin thinking about Pumpkin - (I thought it was just a whim of his lust.) 'her lust.'
Hemlock: 'Grand Master Wicca, this visit will not go, you know you are in the club.' Maybe 'this visitor will not leave, they know you are in the club'?
Hemlock: 'Grand Master Wicca Liturgy; demand to see it immediately.' Maybe 'demands to see you immediately.'
Norma, talking about Mimi: 'He belongs to the society of Eternal Dusk, and likes everything esoteric.' She.
Charly, about Sister Albina: 'Only the members of the Order of Azrael know his name.' Her.
Joaquin about Sister Albina: 'I think it's beautiful, but what the fuck did he come for? And why did he give me the evil eye?' maybe 'I think she's beautiful, but what the fuck did she come for? And why did she give me the evil eye?'
Zayran about Sister Albina: 'I guess that's why you invited him to church, but why did he come in the first place?' to 'why did she come in the first place?'
Joaquin: 'Miranda began his recitation, trying to invoke the spirits.' Her.
Ariza: 'It allows her to kill the other students.' maybe 'You allow me to kill the other students.'
Joaquin: 'He can read my thoughts!' maybe 'You can read my thoughts!' or 'She can red my thoughts.'
Mimi: 'I don't know what Ariza has been doing in his free time.' to 'her free time.'
Joaquin, talking about Sister Albina: 'Hey, what's wrong with him?' Her.
Joaquin, talking about a knight in his vision: 'There is someone next to her... a nun... Sister Albina?' to 'next to him.'
Also about the knight and Sister Albina, Joaquin says, 'Were they close?' instead of 'Were you close?'
Albina says about Melchizedek, 'It was one of the pillars of the Order.' It to He.
Albina says, 'Gideon and Jericho, you remind him a lot of him.' Maybe should be 'you remind them a lot of him.'
Gideon, after knocking down Joaquin: 'There is still some level to go, he is still in training and we will be able to spar.' Maybe 'You need more training before we will be able to spar.'
Charly, talking about what Miriam said: 'Mind you, he said to be early on the beach.' She said
Joaquin, in the bar speaking about the Blind Queen: 'Damn, I needed to see it.' It to her.
Joaquin, about Oalk: 'And why would I want to see it.' him.
Komodo: 'Oalk is a Midnight Wizard and town crier. For a sum of money and amount of reputation, he can choose his title.' I think means 'you can choose your title.'
Komodo : 'Your friends & enemies, you'll know what to call it, thanks to Oalk!' Maybe 'they'll know what to call you.'
Dhalia, about the Nameless Witch and Madeleine: 'That his upbringing with her resulted in her becoming the Mother of Sorrows.' maybe 'That her upbringing...'
Lina, about the 100 Solares Joaquin gives her: 'He needed them for charity!' Maybe "I needed them for charity!'