I see. Thank you for this comment. I'll take note of this. I will add or delete a few dialogues just to make it clearer. Expect more dramas, mystery, love, and terrifying scenes in this story. It'll be interesting in the future updates since we're still at chapter 1. You'll see more backstories on why George have that personality. And also, I just find the kiss the paw apron lewd. I mean, they are furries and asking to kiss the paw is like a proposal to marry him. Anyway, I will revise it because it seems inappropriate.
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Don't feel the need to revise the Apron part, I can understand the reasons you find it lewd, but just want to point out that its based on an Italian thing where they make physical contact with friends and family like that, a kiss on the cheek or the hand, its an old time gentleman thing. It not something I actually expect someone to do, but the idea is for hello, goodbye, and thanks gestures.