Jast passing by, but I heard something outrageous and I want to interject.
If someone ever tell you to delete what you make and scrap it, gently direct them to me, we will have some "explaining" going on. *crack knuckles*
Jokes aside, this story is a really odd mix. One that, as I said with the disclaimer, normal people will most likely flee up front, fearing a simple "text based torture porn". But in fact it is anything but that. True, the shit the MC goes through is horrendous, but is written with underlying empathy for her. This is what makes the whole thing, if not arousing or spirit lifting, worthwhile to me.