Hi I am part of the streamers participating in the Feedback Quest. The VOD of me playing this on stream is up.
This game is exemplary. Amazing, I have little words for it. I feel the game wears its inspirations on its sleeves and feels very engaging to play. Even unfinished and such, it felt engaging. I would enjoy playing this very much.
My few gripes would first be with the Princess' name. It does not need to always be named in full I think. Its fine just keeping it as Princess or soemthing. At some point it just becomes a Tongue Twister. The other issue I felt was the Background was a bit saturated and didn't feel right. Maybe lower the overall saturation a bit. The characters were all good and simple. I loved it all but maybe there should be somet added effects on them. Like maybe different versions lit up based on the background they're in. Something to keep the immersion going because the colour of the art is Pastel-ish, the background has a more dynamic colour range and these two elements clash. HOWEVER make no mistake, I believe a VN is carried by both its art and story and I feel that both the art and story here hold their own with more emphasis on story. Its just subtle updates to the art could boost the quality a bit higher.
Overall, I feel a genuine love for the genre and this game is a good example of how to make a good Visual Novel. This meets the standard and has the potential to far exceed it. Please keep up the amazing work and I hope to see more.