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I'm glad you took the time to respond, these insights and examples are very nice. I'll definitely be looking back at this when I practice. It's crazy how just a few tweaks can drastically change how well a story ebbs and flows. I'll have to work on my punctuation more often.

I remember that book, teacher of mine read it in elementary school for the class. I'll be sure to give it another look. Thank you very much.