That's great ^^, I might do something too like adding some music, or I might not, I am not too passionate about rpg maker development. Here's some feedback about the game you can use
I found it really annoying how I had to often double tap to see the next line of dialogue (not the next dialogue box), there's too many points that ask for a pause.
Improvements
- This needs more music. It's the same song throughout the whole game.
Spelling and writing mistakes:
- There were probably many moments where gender pronouns were mixed up.
- Multiple instances of incorrect uppercasing of words.
- Famous People of Flowen Encyclopedia
- Ike "*She* moved to a Random City" He*, also, maybe lower case random city
- Ike "Bella bought him to Flowen" brought*
- Bella "She is very royal especially towards the ones she loves" did you mean loyal? (not sure if you can use royal in this context since english is not my first language)
- Bella "Even though they gave him Castles and Royalty" Her*. Also, lowercases.
- Rose. There's some confusion as to what ruined everything, was it moving to Flowen or being defeated?
- When dumb brat bitch captures Ike and attempts to rape him "Now, how does it feel to be Ike's cock sleeve?" It should say Bella (note: not exact quote)