unofficial update added to the game not yet posted though

A topic by hentai4magic created Apr 02, 2023 Views: 2,965 Replies: 9

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hello, i modified the game as it was allowed for everyone and i added drop items, this way you can get items such as healing, herbs, armor, weapons.

i'm not the owner / dev / team / or whatever you want to call my of this game: i just trying it out for practice of making my own game.

trying to make act 3 is bit of a hassle i already a have split road map which can lead two other directions one of those for main quest, try to figure out how to do all this stuff so bare with my, i'm not a professional so don't expect a lot. don't expect new images because i can't photo edit too bad at it, might learn it, don't know when, some monsters strength and hp got nerfed because they were too high for first encounter for example you have to level quite bit up and you would still lack some sense of damage, but now i made it fair and square.

ike can be level 99: due him being the main character

rose and bella still remain at max level: 25

did i add anything to shops?:

no, i might do it if anyone suggest anything in it.

Techno King1 year ago

That's great ^^, I might do something too like adding some music, or I might not, I am not too passionate about rpg maker development. Here's some feedback about the game you can use

I found it really annoying how I had to often double tap to see the next line of dialogue (not the next dialogue box), there's too many points that ask for a pause.

Improvements

This needs more music. It's the same song throughout the whole game.

Spelling and writing mistakes:

There were probably many moments where gender pronouns were mixed up.
Multiple instances of incorrect uppercasing of words.
Famous People of Flowen Encyclopedia
- Ike "*She* moved to a Random City" He*, also, maybe lower case random city
- Ike "Bella bought him to Flowen" brought*
- Bella "She is very royal especially towards the ones she loves" did you mean loyal? (not sure if you can use royal in this context since english is not my first language)
- Bella "Even though they gave him Castles and Royalty" Her*. Also, lowercases.
- Rose. There's some confusion as to what ruined everything, was it moving to Flowen or being defeated?
When dumb brat bitch captures Ike and attempts to rape him "Now, how does it feel to be Ike's cock sleeve?" It should say Bella (note: not exact quote)