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Super minor, but there seems to be an extra space at the start of this line from Alex:

" Miss Bardot, congratulations! Would you like to share any words for those young athletes trying to achieve your levels of success?"

The same two lines further in, when she's again taking the role of the interviewer. Presumably because of the italics, but it still looks odd to me.

Babelismoj1 year ago

When Orion first lands in Ogygia, he's thinking to himself, and in this one line the question mark is outside the thinking parentheses:

"(Where am I)?"

Babelismoj1 year ago

An extra space before another italicized line:

" Ah, I see you have now begun guarding yourself. Your efforts are futile, however. I will just have to exert myself a little further…"

Caribdis1 year ago(+2)

Thank you so much for the typos!! I fixed them all

Babelismoj1 year ago

You're welcome! There really are barely any, I'm very impressed :) I'll continue reporting them as I come across them.

Babelismoj1 year ago

I think this line from young Penelope also has a space at the start:

" Haha I bet."

Babelismoj1 year ago

This might not be wrong, it could be slangy and the word "and" could just be repeated, but I think in this line from Nancy,

"And… and you planning to pursue anything more serious with her?",

the second "and" was perhaps meant to be an "are".

Babelismoj1 year ago

In the same scene, she says "heavens knows", which should be either "heaven knows" or "heavens know" (number agreement).

(I'll start a new thread after this for any further reports to avoid these lines becoming too narrow.)

Caribdis1 year ago(+1)

Thank you very much!

quest12341 year ago

Yo dev any planned pregnancy content in the future ?

Caribdis1 year ago

Yes

quest12341 year ago

Thanks

Keep safe and keep up the good work

BiRd Boitg1 year ago

? so like someone will give birth and we will watch it lol

quest12341 year ago

no really like wanted to ask in the harem end of the game we can have sex with the pregnant girls and after a time lapse we can see mc playing with the kids while the wives are chatting among themselves

itch.io

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