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Based on the credits I assume there was sounds that were played throughout the game for some reason I wasn't able to hear anything while playing through which is really sad as I loved the aesthetic of the game!

The story was very interesting and I really loved the little details through the game such as the shadowing of text or the model and detailing of the "next" button! I already enjoyed the styling of the text alone but when the game swapped to background I fell in love this is exactly what I was hoping to find in this jam for a text scroller! I'm really sad I didn't get to experience the sounds but im sure they tied the environment together even more beautifully. I also have to say I love the cover art for the game its such a unique style. The only thing I think I have to say for feedback would be I think some form of blur fade from the black the the image would be a really cool touch to add more of an alive feeling to the game! also maybe at critical moments in the story giving the text movement or something to once again just make the game feel even more alive and add to that eerie feeling of the atmosphere!


overall loved the game! Can't wait to see future work from you :D

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Oh, there absolutely should be sound... hmm. I know sometimes Twine has a problem loading these things purely through HTML5; downloading it tends to make it work better, so maybe I'll try to make a note on the description. I appreciate the heads up!

And the blur fade idea is wonderful! I was thinking of it a bit during dev time, but... well, to be honest, it's a mix of not knowing how to pull that off, and running low on time. Text movement without Twine is messy, but it's something I could look into as well, maybe a subtle shaking or something like that?

In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if for technical reasons it wasn't ideal... Thank you for playing!

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Oh yea I get that I don't have any experience with Twine but I understand it having its own set of problems just like unity.

I'm gonna go and check that out and see if i can hear the sound I would really love to hear the whole game played as it was meant to be!

Of course thank you for making such a wonderful game :D