Hi, congrats on your game! :) The idea was well implemented. The only thing I think is missing is perhaps dividing the game into levels. I found the movement a bit challenging, so when I had already progressed a long way in the game and died, it was a bit frustrating to go back to the beginning. Another interesting point to consider would be keeping the audio of the story playing even when the player dies, so that it doesn't repeat from the beginning once it finishes speaking.
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