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Hi, I managed to enjoy your game despite some technical flaws and minimal implementation. It all depends on what you want to achieve but getting testers for your games and fixing all the problems they find will most likely improve your games quite a lot, and you will learn something for future games.

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Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the game. I was in a hurry to complete the game for the Jam, thus not all planned scenario elements have been implemented. I will try to introduce them during the Jam and after it.

I noticed that my game lists many elements in the rooms (like furnitures, plants, vegetables etc.) but they are not interactive, there is no response to them. Again it was because of shortage of time, but also because scenario doesn't cover them - they are just a decoration to descriptions.

The tutorial is almost not present - another flaw.

I will fix these flaws at first place. 

As of pluses I noticed that my work-flow is much better and future text-adventures should be more enjoyable and playable.  It's a matter of organisation.

Thank you again for playing and placing your rating.

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I just finished your game!

If you are willing to update it, there are no rules against making updates during the voting period. I will revise my rating for your game if you do make an update.

Good start to writing text adventures. Keep going! I'm sure you have some fun stories to tell.

Thank you so much for playing and rating. :-) Yes, the rules allow the polishing of the game.