The scene transitions and opening cutscene are neat. I think the dialogue is fun and well implemented, but could be scaled back just a little bit. Everything is very polished: fantastic entry!
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I want to be clear: I am not any kind of skilled or competent writer, but it seems like you could tighten up (edit) the dialog without losing content. There's a lot of love in the dialogue system right now, which is awesome - but the 'treacherous journey' feels like it might be in the back seat right now.