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Possibly the most solid entry in terms of overall balance. Great presentation with the use of (very cute) custom sprites, great animations, and fun Ren'py tricks I haven't seen before in a FVN. And I really loved the way you used choices as a tool to explore the core theme of the story.

The story and the characters were great, at its peak the interaction between the two romantic interests was genuinely moving. Possibly the only part I didn't enjoy as much was the ending: not because I think there is something wrong with the way the story ended per se, but because it made feel the story a bit less unique, something we've seen before, as opposed to the strong artistic identity it had carved for itself in the preceding parts.

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Sorry to disappoint you with the ending. I can understand why you think that way. Admittedly, that's the weakest part of the entire story, which is a big mistake, especially since I intended to use it as a setup for the third character and the next story. But hey it's a great lesson for me and I'll do my best to do better next time! ^^