I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Story (2):
I am only rating the story so low because at a certain point, the ending just drags on.
I kept expecting a Fade to turn to into a “THE END” but it just kept going on and on. Perhaps that’s supposed to be the point, like the rotting body that is MY WOLF.
Drowning me in references that I won’t understand is also a good way to make be disappointed.
Presentation (3):
The sprite edits and the disturbing act transitions really brought everything together.
You did a lot with what you could do. The CG was amazing. Side sprites and testing out the bubble text feature were interesting decisions.
Creativity (5):
This is the first submission that I’m rating that receives 4 or over in a category. (If you forget about me rating Before You Depart.)
You ready did say to yourself; “What’s the most fucked up thing that I can write for this jam without taking things too far?” And then you made it.
I was thinking that this would just be some sort of Yandere story or like a homage to the movie(/book?): Misery. But you took in a way that still has me quivering.
Total (10):
I am scared to look into your other works. Characters with scleras that aren’t white, freak me a out a little. After reading this, I don’t think I can look at Gin and Rohan the same way ever again. They now look soulless to me.