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Don't want to sound mean or harsh, but the demo has left a very bad impression on me. 

* An incrediby generic premise (a modern day teenager isekaied to yet another fantasy world to meet a wolf himbo);

* An incredibly hamfisted dialog (characters say exactly what they want which comes acrosss overly direct, lacking nuance and realism --- real people don't talk like that); 

* an incredibly rushed pacing (it takes only ten diologue boxes for protagonist to lament about his life for a bit, then to get isekaied, then to meet the wolf himbo without even giving a reader a time to process what the hell has even happened) 

* and the demo wasn't even tested properly as selecting literally any other option then "new game" is getting me a classic Ren'Py error message "an exception has occured". 

Even the artstyle (which is the only good part) has its issues: all wolfs look way too buff and protagonist somehow already looks like a medieval noble rather then modern day teenager.

I hope it will improve later but so far the entire demo looks incredibly amateurish so far as to come really close of being yet another Ren'Py asset flip.

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Thank you for your feedback. We decided to start from the core and from scratch. We are rewriting the story and improving on it. It'll take a long time. But these things happen, and I am sorry for disappointing. I appreciate your feedback and we will do better. I am also redrawing some of the sprites to make them look more appealing to look at.

"...the demo wasn't even tested properly as selecting literally any other option then "new game" is getting me a classic Ren'Py error message "an exception has occured". 

--I'm going to fixed that. Thank you for the feedback.