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grywec1 year ago (8 edits) (+1)

yay, new release!

to celebrate this a few typos :D

./script3.rpy:3869: lenght->length

./gallery.rpy:16868, ./script.rpy:27196: obediant->obedient

./gallery.rpy:10532, ./script2.rpy:6928: roomate->roommate

./computer.rpy:5266, ./live.rpy:831, ./script2.rpy:64: alredy->already

gallery.rpy:17567, script3.rpy:792: cassandra->Cassandra

gallery.rpy:17704, script3.rpy:931: incorrect speaker, should be mc instead of ca

script3.rpy:1038: incorrect speaker, should be mc instead of em

gallery.rpy:23724, script3.rpy:1672, script3.rpy:1825: interractions->interactions

gallery.rpy:23727, script3.rpy:1675: acttons->actions

gallery.rpy:23804, script3.rpy:1754: his potential->her potential (this is about Emilie)

gallery.rpy:11743, gallery.rpy:11744, script3.rpy:2336, script3.rpy:2337: coing->going (or was this one on purpose, for the alliteration with cum?)

Atemx Games1 year ago

Thank you, I'll fix that in the next episode!

grywec1 year ago(+1)

you're welcome, and thanks again for the game.

just noticed a typo of my own (sigh) and edited my first post - best take a look again

grywec1 year ago(+1)

few more.

gallery.rpy:21326, script3.rpy:3102: langish->languish

script3.rpy:4656, script3.rpy:4670, script2.rpy:5046: iris->Iris

gallery.rpy:8014, gallery.rpy:23098, gallery.rpy:23233, rerun.rpy:1698, script3.rpy:5049, script3.rpy:5185, script.rpy:21653: You pussy->Your pussy

script3.rpy, between lines 5850 and 5950: '28 July', 'July 28', 'June 28th' - pick one date format and use it all the time :) [you most often use <month> <day> but more exceptions exist in other script files. happy hunting]

3x in script.rpy, 2x in script3.rpy: Iris's->Iris'

gallery.rpy:12099, rerun.rpy:2169, script3.rpy:6302: They way->The way

script3:6733 "Instead I convinced her to come with us to the convention." nah, not really :D Iris invited herself and C was at first against it

script3.rpy:6948: mc "Yes, Marcus is away so he wants to take his mind off things." -> 'she' and 'her', MC talks abaout Natacha

script3.rpy:11114: you're->there are

gallery.rpy:12316, script3.rpy:12281: beautifull->beautiful

script3.rpy:12660: ph "Great, I'll sign up tonight." -> ey! where's the "$ emilie_fans += 1"?!?

"label d34_girl_name" - no remark when chosing Emilie? (and you could extend this a lot, e.g. using Cassandra as boy name. or Nicolas as girl name. or vice-versa. or Emilie's nick name; generally all names existing in the game - probably not worth the effort, but fun for players stumbling over it)

general remark: Emilie is more often than not displayed wearing light-coloured clothes and/or in front of a white(ish) background. I think more contrasting colours around her would bring out her appearance

Atemx Games1 year ago (1 edit) (+1)

Thanks for all the corrections, I'll be sure to fix it! Regarding the choice of names, I'd thought about it but it added quite a bit of complexity to the code which I don't think many people would have noticed... However, it's true that making one for Emilie, for example, is a good idea.

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