The game looks really good, I really like the art!
If you want to show some more expression you could change the portrait for each new sentence (just changing the face not redrawing the entire character). But to be honest I think it's perfect as it is! Your game looks really great keep going!
If you want to give my game a shot here's the link: https://bilothefirst.itch.io/biloessenol
I checked out your game and here's my feedback:
1) The art style is really cool and minimalistic. I liked the sounds on the title screen and I generally enjoyed the vibe.
2) Great job on the way you've setup the first few levels as a tutorial. Clearly you're setting up the level to practice the mechanics being presented and it felt very intuitive.
3) I really liked the music and wanted to ask you where you found it btw or if you made it yourself. The main loop got a bit repetitive after a bit but its still overall very chill.
4) The character's movement feels a bit too floaty, that could be on purpose but wasn't sure.
5) The camera might zoomed out a bit too much, the characters are cute and I felt I wanted to get a closer look at them.
6) The character's attack needs a bit of work in my opinion, the range is very small and to be perfectly honest I'm not sure what it is that he's throwing at the birds :P. Maybe you meant the range to be small but I found it frustrating how close I had to get to the birds to hit them. Maybe increase the range and make the birds chase the character if you get close?
Still, it was a nice experience. Really motivated me to stop dithering and release a playable vertical slice for my game :P.
Thanks for the feedback!
I made everything myself including the music 😅 sorry if it got annoying I tried my best.
You might be right a bout the zoom I just left as it was in the mobile version... I don't have any plans to update the game but I will defenitely use your feedback for my next projects!
Thank you!
