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Verloren starts around 22 minutes-ish.  https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1920629393

I was really confused by the start of the game.  I thought I was Helen.  Then I thought I was the Captain.  Then it turned out I wasn't either of those.  The way it is presented makes the jump to you playing as the kid, Sriracha was her name, somewhat jarring.  I almost wonder if it'd make more sense to not know there was a baby stolen.  It's just strange playing as a character that doesn't know as much about their story arc as we do.

The school is really, really big.  I like that we have the teleportation system to get around, but some of the rooms don't necessarily have a distinct enough feeling to set them apart from other rooms. I think for the gym it might make more sense if we started closer to it?  Teleporting into the Gym room but not seeing a gym was slightly confusing.

I did not go into the bathroom, but I was certainly tempted to choose that room since it was the first thing I saw.

Combat was entertaining, and having the ability to increase/decrease the random encounters is fantastic.  I felt the tutorials for combat were well explained, and I don't think I was ever lost in it.

The writing is well done, and I liked the banter that occurred between all of the students.  I also think adding in the sparkles to help point out the items you can take or interact with is a very helpful idea.  

I don't know much about card games or gambling so I can't speak on how authentic those were, but from what I could tell the slot machine and Blackjack seemed to be pretty legit.  

I've played a fair amount of RPG Maker games, so graphically it looks similar.  I do think you've done a good job in placing items and decorations around the area to help it look lived in and not cluttered.  

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Congratulations, you are the first streamer ever who didn't try to open the door of the men's bathroom.

More seriously, thanks for trying out the game.

I have a question concerning your comment and the stream:
-You are not the first one to be a bit confused by the school layout, and I think you put the point on the main reason why:
some floor are at first glance quite similar to each other, notably the magitorium and the gym floor, as both have classrooms close to the stairs instead of the proper gym/magic room. I don't plan to completely redo those whole maps for obvious time/benefit considerations, but from my experience from another building where people sometimes lost themselves into, a simple sign can make a lot of differences. Was there any floors who were hard to recognise, or were the magitorium/gym the main culprits?

A sign I added to help people find a certain room:

PS:
Don't hesitate to come back for more after feedbackquest if you want to. 🧚🧚🧚

The magitorium/gym, and the game room are the primary culprits.  I think it was also called the resting room?  I'd have to go back into the stream to look or jump back into the game to be sure.  I think adding a sign would be of great help.


Are the three floors easier to differentiate now?




Yes!  The signs are perfect.  They fit in well, and instantly noticeable!