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Hello, thanks very much for taking the time to play it. Glad there were aspects that you liked. The plan is to release four parts so this opening Part is laying the foundations/themes for the payoffs (hopefully) later down the line. It ends on a bit of a cliff hanger so hopefully that will hook players to the part 2. A quest log is in the pipeline, at the moment the PC in the protagonists apartment provides clues and reminders on what to do next but I agree it could be better implemented. (the ladder is to the left of the fence bit the lady opened).  i've added some more player engagement in act 2 but thinking about ways to implement more in this first game. Interesting points about the hooking narrative part will have a think about getting more of those in. Thanks again for the feedback, all really useful. 

I played your game and gave it a rating. Not usually my kind of game but actually quite enjoyed the short experience. Bit weird, bit disturbing but in good ways. Song at the start was well done, only minor nit-pick was the text seemed to scroll at varying speeds, not sure if intentional or not. When the game closed a few times was close to walking away as wasn't sure what was happening but glad I went back in and got an ending.

Thanks again. 

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I'm glad you're working on improvements and part 2, and thank you so much for playing and rating!

I'm happy you enjoyed even though it isn't usually your kind of game. To address the game closing: There is an easter egg where if you skip the girl's dialogue when she first appears, she will warn you not to do it again, and if you skip again, she will crash the game. Also, the text moving at different speeds during the character selection is somewhat intentional, like how it moves really slowly when picking the boy. There are two different outcomes to the fight, new dialogue upon a second replay, all that good stuff :)

When I get time, I'll look back into parts 1 and 2. Thanks for pointing out the ladder thing! I tried to consult the gameplay video from NolanAlighieri about it, but he stopped playing before he got that far :( I might reach out to him about playing my game. I'm interested to see where Sapphire City goes, best of luck to you!

No problem! Yes I think that happened a few times, that the girl crashed the game. Was cool when I figured out what was going on, nice touch. Will have to go back to try and see that other ending. Thanks again for playing my game, yes I recommend reaching out to Nolan, he's a good bloke and plays through lots of games from Devs like us in his streams.